Elevator Pitch: How To Create The Perfect One

Elevator Pitch: How To Create The Perfect One

I noticed that not many people have their elevator pitch ready. It’s also called elevator-speech, -presentation, or -story. And, to satisfy my international public, an elevator is what the English call a lift.

To avoid any communication problems, it’s that cage that goes up and down in a shaft and brings people to different floors in a building.

Sometimes it only serves a few floors, sometimes a tenfold of that.
Which I only mention to indicate that there’s very limited time to give an elevator pitch. From 10 to 50 seconds maybe.

But these few seconds can be very valuable. Because…you just happen to be in the elevator with someone who is important to you. It may even be the only moment you are alone with that person. Now it’s time to grab the opportunity…

…with your elevator pitch.

elevator pitchWhich basically is nothing else but educating the other person about what you do, preferably with an implied benefit. Because, as always, they want to know ‘What’s In It For Me’, remember?

Now, if I would start my elevator pitch with: “I’m a chiropractor and I focus on diagnosis, treatment and prevention of mechanical disorders of the musculoskeletal system, with special emphasis on the spine”, I could get a response like: “Aha, interesting!” and that would be it. Photo Credit: McPig

Yeah, I know, I exaggerated a bit. But even if I explain that “I manipulate the spine and joints to make people feel better”, which is better already, I still may get that same response.

You see, what’s missing here is my target market and the problems that target market experience.

Suppose I would start with: “You know many people in the office always sit in the same position at their desk or behind their computer all day”, I would have identified my target market.

If I had that followed by: “As a result of that, they experience many muscle problems and back and neck pains that increase every day they do that same work, which makes them washed-out”, I would have described the problem too.

Mind you, I’m NOT a chiropractor, so I’m making this up. A real one could do much better.

Now we already have three elements of a great elevator pitch: target, problem and the solution (the ‘what I do’).

Next, all you need is to mention some results of your actions. Like, in the example above: “As a result of that, many of these people feel much better and are full of energy to complete their daily tasks”.

There, I’ve just described what I do as clearly as possible in just 4 sentences. Like the good marketer that I am, I can add a benefit to that: “On average, people treated by me produce 30 to 50% more work which make their superiors extremely happy”.

There you have my complete elevator pitch in 5 sentences: target market, their problem, what I do, the results of my work and finally, the benefits it delivers.

Again, I made this chiropractor thing up. A real one could improve this within minutes.

The point is though, that your elevator pitch never is complete. It’s an ongoing process of little, tiny improvements, depending on how recipients react to it.
You should always try to improve your best elevator pitch.

Do I need to say that, while this is called an elevator pitch, it doesn’t necessarily need to be said in an elevator?

You could also do that while waiting for the tube (for the Internationals: that’s an English word for underground railway system, also known as subway, metro or U-bahn).
Or waiting for a train, bus or tram (tramcar, trolley, trolley car, or streetcar; a railborne vehicle, of lighter weight and construction than a train, designed for the transport of passengers), shuttles or whatever.
Or, while standing in line for a dinner during a seminar!

And online, you can showcase your elevator pitch just before a webinar starts, when you’re in the room waiting for the host. Or whenever the hosts asks who’s online and you are allowed a tiny pitch for your online business.

There are many occasions for a good elevator pitch.
Create one! Keep it under development until you’ve found a great one. And even then, always try to improve your elevator pitch, because it can lead to a lot of money!

So, what’s your take?
Do you have an elevator pitch?

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17 Responses To: “Elevator Pitch: How To Create The Perfect One“

RhondaL says:
October 17th, 2008 at 2:20 pm

Working a benefit into the beginning of the elevator pitch is a new angle.

I’m also an aspiring novelist, so “elevator pitches” for agents and editors at conferences are a big topic. Since I write mystery/suspense, we usually start by identifying the main character with some kind of gimmick — like a bookworm cop or a fashionista librarian.

We do use different pitches for different audiences. For example, we would present a different pitch to a literary agent and another to our neighbor the reality show addict.

RhondaL

RhondaL


Ian Blackford says:
October 17th, 2008 at 3:42 pm

I over heard someone explain their technique - they called it the 3ft Rule.

Basically when some one got within 3ft of them they told them: who they were, what they did, and asked did they want one.

I’ve applied it a few times and it works - to a degree, I think it needs a little more sophistication as you explain above.

Ian


Billy says:
October 17th, 2008 at 8:28 pm

Well I suppose I better find a way to get over being a shy guy!

I met the guy who wrote the original “Italian Job” - film with Michael Cain by the way. He told a great story about getting into a lift with his potential producer. They were just about to say yes to the screenplay on the agreement that the writer agreed to use Robert Redford for the lead.

Anyway the writer wanted Cain and dug his heels in. They got into the lift and by the time they reached the producer’s floor, the writer managed to persuade the producer to go with Cain!

The rest, as they say, is history!


Tony in Bellingham says:
October 17th, 2008 at 10:11 pm

That is really a great way to construct an elevator pitch. I’d like to use this method to create one for me. Is it ok if I print this out to study it?
Tony


Spencer Chun says:
October 17th, 2008 at 11:04 pm

This is a great way to generate new business or to meet new friends. I have to remember this when I get in a elevator.

Spencer


greatmanagement says:
October 17th, 2008 at 11:08 pm

I like the simple structure you put forward to creating the elevator pitch.

In my experience many people think they can just ‘wing it’ (i.e. make up their pitch on the spot).

Using this simple structure will take only a few minutes, so thanks.

Andrew


Getting Pregnant Tips says:
October 18th, 2008 at 7:33 am

I admit: I don’t have an elevator pitch. I really should work on one (or two). I love explaining things. I’ve been a tutor so I really like going over the details with people. I need to practice being concise or I can turn a yes or no question into an hour long lecture.

Stacy


Victor P says:
October 19th, 2008 at 9:58 am

I have an elevator pitch that I use in my networking group. Each Friday we meet and before the meeting we each get up and give a 60-second pitch about our business.
My elevator pitch is always evolving because many of the people there are there every week so I have to keep things fresh, and in addition, my business model changes with the seasons, thus requiring a new 60-second sales pitch.
Victor


Busby SEO Test says:
October 20th, 2008 at 7:52 pm

for 2 years im still not making money from affiliates, I still confuse how to make good sales with internet or make a lead.


Monty's Mega Marketing says:
October 20th, 2008 at 10:04 pm

I couldn’t agree more. Your elevator pitch is one of the most vital parts of your networking efforts.
- Chris


Roger Hamilton says:
October 21st, 2008 at 7:47 am

This is an interesting post. Thanks for the useful information. Hope to see your new posts soon.


Grumble's Internet Guff says:
October 21st, 2008 at 9:20 am

Interesting way of looking at it. I don’t know how I’d react to your elevator pitch to be honest, but if you can be smooth enough to deliver all that WITHOUT sounding like a salesman then good on you! Something for me to think about!

Matt


Tom Volkar / Delightful Work says:
October 22nd, 2008 at 7:02 am

You know how some folks who don’t know what they want to be when they grow up often say they are thinking about going back to school?

Well what I do is work with them to help them discover their unique strengths and values so they can seize their freedom and build the business they were meant to run.


polyGeek says:
October 23rd, 2008 at 5:29 pm

You know, the elevator pitch approach directly applies to a lot of blog posts. After reading this I just thought of a very good way to edit an existing post to make it obvious who my application is useful for. -thanks!


Tracy Benungski - Internet business make money online says:
October 24th, 2008 at 6:07 am

Nice comparison and a valuable motivating post.


Noel says:
October 28th, 2008 at 1:13 am

I heard about elevator pitch about 8 years ago but still I don’t have any :(

I guess it’s time to make one and really apply it.


Web Marketing Services says:
November 11th, 2008 at 8:23 pm

Nice tips. I’ve never used an elevator pitch but it sounds worth the effort of developing one and trying it out.

Thanks! -Scott Gilmour


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