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USP: Differentiate Your Site In 30 Seconds.

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If time permits, I’ll try to check the blogs and websites of people commenting on my blog. I want to see who they are, what they produce and how they differentiate and position themselves in their market. I want to learn from their USP (Unique Selling Proposition).

Last Saturday John left a comment on my ‘About’ page. My bio reminded him about … him. Hmmm, very flattering. flattering

But he also asked my opinion about his site and since John was smart enough to mention he came to this blog via Copyblogger - thus positioning himself as quite smart in my opinion - I immediately went over to eVentureBiz.

USP to Differentiate

Mind you, this is not to bash anyone or anyone’s site.
It’s just an example from someone who asked my opinion and I only use his site to make the point, mentioned in the title of this post.

So…

I see a nice design. It’s not too cluttered, nice colors, easy to read.
Same applies to the navigation panes on top and at the left.
So far, so good.

But then I noticed something that I wonder about on many sites: why should I buy here? In other words, how is this site different from others and how is it unique. What’s the USP?

In the header it says: eVentureBiz, which is branding his website. Great, but what does it tell us? I’m still in the dark.
And below that it says Social Entrepreneurial Web Hosting. Huh? What’s that?

I mean, the majority of people coming along will have some idea about web hosting, but what the heck is Social Entrepreneurial Web Hosting?
The term may be a great USP, but in my opinion needs to be explained immediately at the beginning of the page.

Now, the page starts with: Welcome to eVentureBiz.
That’s nice, but all visitors at this specific point want to know is “What’s In It For Me (WIIFM)”! If you don’t tell them here and right now, they’re gone!
Stating ‘a Web Hosting and Entrepreneurial Development Company’ isn’t going to do the trick.

Then the page continues with ‘Purpose of this Site’. Which is great, because now we can learn what this site is about, try to discover what’s in it for us and investigate further or click away.
(Always remember that you can’t please everyone, so people, even in your target group, still will click away. No time, to confused, not appealed to your site, whatever reason, you can’t please them all.)

Ok, on.
Reading the purpose of this site, I would say that it targets the product (web hosting) to beginning online entrepreneurs. But the product, if I understand correctly, is not just web hosting, it comes with tons of extra and even personal help.
If that is the case, don’t let them hanging.

In general, the first halve minute some stranger spend on your site, she has to see three things:

  1. Who is it for.
  2. What exactly is offered.
  3. Why is it offered.

Number one and two are clear, number three is ‘reason why’ marketing (see Michel Fortin’s Your Reader Wants To Know These 5 Things). It binds your visitor with you… or not (that’s why some, despite a good offer, will not buy from you).

The fastest way to accomplish this is to put that in head- and sublines, like:

“New Internet Entrepreneurs: Web Hosting With Tons of PERSONAL Help”
I KNOW Where You Are Now. Been There, Done That!
I DO Care and My Social Hosting Site Will Help You.

Now, I’m not saying this is the ultimate headline. It’s just a quickie. Can be improved, thousand times. Go back to Copyblogger and read Magnetic Headlines.

But it does the job! It answers the first three questions.

In the intro paragraphs, you build on these headlines. Since you understand where these newbies are coming from, tell them about the problems they have, right now!
Briefly make it clear you’ve been there too, so you can relate and they can begin trusting you.
And then tell them about the solutions you’ve found for these problems they have and how you can help them.

Then, take down that blue logo at the right and replace it with a small picture of yourself, so they can SEE who they’re dealing with.
By now it’s time to introduce yourself (briefly, you only have to show that you’re the expert, they don’t care about you personally).

After that, expand on the solution you are offering and make it so, that it blends in with your USP. Remember, social?

That’s how you differentiate yourself in 30 seconds.
Work your USP!

So…. marketers and copywriters, did I leave anything out?
Can you help John with an excellent headline?
Leave your comments below.

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5 Responses To: “USP: Differentiate Your Site In 30 Seconds.“

Raymond Chua says:
January 21st, 2008 at 9:05 pm

Do you have any tips to work on USP?



John says:
January 27th, 2008 at 12:50 am

Second, I want to apologize for not being available to comment on this post for a few days, but I’m back online now.

About the review:

Well, what can I say . . . as I read your post I was nodding my head saying, “Yes I see, he’s right, I didn’t do that.” I completely get that you only have a few seconds to convince your site’s visitor to first stay on your site for a bit longer and second, to actually spend money at some point. I tried to tell my site’s visitors immediately what the point of my website’s about by putting a few bullet points at the top of the page outlining the “Purpose of This Site.” I see now where I fell short.

When designing my site, I tried keeping most of those points in my head but I see now I’ve fallen short on a few. This was the reason I asked for a review. I think I pretty well point out what I do on my site but not necessarily why someone should sign up for hosting on my site and how it will benefit them.

I was glad to see I was able to get who my target market is across to you but after reading your post and then taking a second look, I think I could zero-in even a little more and make sure new entrepreneurs just starting out knows that I’m talking to them.

I think you’re right on with taking out the whole “Welcome to eVentureBiz . . .” and “a Web Hosting and Entrepreneurial Development Company.” This I will change immediately.

As for the Social Entrepreneurial Web Hosting, it’s definitely something I came up with to differentiate my web hosting company from other more typical ones. Being that it’s something new, I will be sure to explain what that means immediately to my site visitors.

Thanks again for the wonderful critique and I always take them constructively. Also, I don’t mind if you want to remove my comment from your *About* page. I’m sure you don’t really care to have everyone who reads your About page to read my comment of how I relate to you (I don’t think you really cared to hear that anyway??).

Thanks also for the wonderful informative posts.


John says:
January 27th, 2008 at 12:54 am

Sorry, when I did a cut and paste from Microsoft Word to your comment box I must of missed the first part of my comment above - so here’s the first part:

—————————————

Case, first I would like to thank you for setting aside your valuable time and giving me a GREAT critique in regards to my website. I have been to many “review my website” forums and no one has given me such useful information.


Case Stevens says:
January 28th, 2008 at 4:17 am

I’m glad you like it John. I’m sure you can use it to improve your site and become successful.


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